Test Screening Feedback

1. MCCAT:

• Media Language (A-E)------: B

• Conventions (A-E)-----------: B

• Creativity (A-E)--------------: C

• Attention to Detail (A-E)---: C

• Technical Proficiency (A-E)-: C

2. Positive comments

• (cinematography?)---: "it was good"..."camera work was steady"... "marvelous"..."very good"..."good shots & angles"..."some steady shots"..."good location"..."good angles"..."good shots of people"
  

• (mise en scene?)---:"good"..."girlish stuff in the background"..."relevant settings"..."shaky camera-authentic for the documentary"..."bazza's g/m background was good-red knitting, red sofa" ( i didn't even realise dat 1 ha ha shows you were watching our footage carefully!)..."good to show your grandma knitting"..."good shopping centre setting"..."in the town- good setting"..."very good"..."fantastic"

• (lighting?)---: "absolutely fabulous"..."good"..."very good"..."good lighting"..."good lighting in shopping centre and at the house"

• (sound?)---: "sound was clear at some points"..."good"..."good in some interviews"...

• (conventions? matching audience?)---: "towards women- shows good conventions"..."good"..."using different ages/genders- mainly women"..."mainly women showed which is good"...
  

3. Constructive criticism

• (cinematography?)---: "bad"..."more close ups"...

• (mise en scene?)---: "mise en scene at some points was not good"..."bad"..."the mise en scene of the vox pops"..."some backgrounds need to be changed"...
  

• (lighting?)---: "a bit dull"..."bad"..."fair lighting"...

• (sound?)---: "it was a bit loud at times"..."bad"..."sound is low when doing vox pops"..."talking needs to be made more clear"...."sound needed to be higher"...

• (conventions? matching audience?)---: "bad"..."needs to relate more to women's views"...
  

4.

• What else would you (or the target audience) like to see in this production? (scenes? sequences?)

"more creativity"..." various views"..."better sound"..."more updated music"..."show a range of different points of views"..."basrans mum"

• Suggestions for post-production/editing (music? voiceover? cutaways? montage? cross cutting? titles? slo-mo?)
  

"voiceovers are needed on basrans g/m"..."more close-up shots"..."more zooms"..."cleare lighting"..."a better voice over"..."use sound and voiceovers"..."music"

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